The feedback I received from the past two elevator pitch assignments have generally been positive. The only feedback I've gotten in pitches and interviews to be taken away from is the practicality an affordability of the USB's.
3) I made sure to include future plans about promotions and convenient delivery systems to address those issues.
Hi Gabby,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your elevator pitch. It was brief and informative and you spoke very well. I don't really have an criticism for you, so I guess that is good! I like how you included the other information such as delivery systems. That's definitely something I would've been thinking about if I had watched one of your earlier pitches. If you get a chance, take a look at my elevator pitch as well. Here is the link:
https://principlesofentrepreneurship.wordpress.com/2016/03/15/elevator-pitch-no-3/
Good luck in the class and on your idea!
You did a really great job delivering your pitch and I enjoyed how youtook facts about students and malnutrition in order to really sell the product. I know that there are some products out there that are very similar to these products but I don't know of any snack ones that are specifically directed towards college students. Keep up the great work.
ReplyDeleteHi Gabby,
ReplyDeleteI told this to someone already, but I do appreciate you took the time to dress up a little and look presentable in front of the camera. Some didn’t put in that effort, which took away almost all the credibility for me.
Actually all the pitches I have seen target college students! Don’t worry, I didn’t see your idea.
Here is my pitch on my blog:
http://rileyent.blogspot.com/2016/03/elevator-pitch-no-3.html